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Feedback request: 'Escape' by Noire-Ighaan Feedback request: 'Escape' by Noire-Ighaan
So before releasing the novel I decided to fix some stuff.
One of my CGs is totally redrawn ( this one: ), some of them got minor fixes etc.
But this one is really bugging me, cause I don't know what to do.
I suck at drawing animals and I know that something is off with her face, but I'm not sure how to fix this :/
Anybody can help me? Do you guys have links to some usefull tutorials? Any tricks and tips how can I fix that?

Please help :la:
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BeastManGamer Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
some minor issues with the head and face:
1. for the turning of the head the nose is a little to centered toward the front
2. the ear should be more to the left of the head
3. the shading of the fur is off as others have said but its only because the main light source (the moon) is behind them
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ObsessedCat Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the face just seems a little too triangular to me
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Manga319 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh and unless your going for full on front view you need to angle the nose a little bit more to the left.
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Manga319 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with everyone else just shade it a bit more and maybe make the left eye a little bigger and I think you've got it.
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UfanNitram Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I figured it out!
A.) it needs darker shading,
B.) the head is too wide and the eyes are too far apart.
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EpicPoohBear Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
where is the novel...if tis up, cus im horrible at navigating through DA XD
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Noire-Ighaan Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's in production :D
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EpicPoohBear Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 Yay.
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Shiori5436 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just make her face a little darker and i think u will be good^^
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gamzeerules Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
make it a little it darker
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