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Feedback request: 'Escape' by Noire-Ighaan Feedback request: 'Escape' by Noire-Ighaan
So before releasing the novel I decided to fix some stuff.
One of my CGs is totally redrawn ( this one: ), some of them got minor fixes etc.
But this one is really bugging me, cause I don't know what to do.
I suck at drawing animals and I know that something is off with her face, but I'm not sure how to fix this :/
Anybody can help me? Do you guys have links to some usefull tutorials? Any tricks and tips how can I fix that?

Please help :la:
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:iconbeastmangamer:
BeastManGamer Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
some minor issues with the head and face:
1. for the turning of the head the nose is a little to centered toward the front
2. the ear should be more to the left of the head
3. the shading of the fur is off as others have said but its only because the main light source (the moon) is behind them
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ObsessedCat Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the face just seems a little too triangular to me
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Manga319 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh and unless your going for full on front view you need to angle the nose a little bit more to the left.
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Manga319 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with everyone else just shade it a bit more and maybe make the left eye a little bigger and I think you've got it.
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UfanNitram Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I figured it out!
A.) it needs darker shading,
B.) the head is too wide and the eyes are too far apart.
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EpicPoohBear Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
where is the novel...if tis up, cus im horrible at navigating through DA XD
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Noire-Ighaan Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's in production :D
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:iconepicpoohbear:
EpicPoohBear Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 Yay.
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Shiori5436 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just make her face a little darker and i think u will be good^^
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gamzeerules Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
make it a little it darker
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NicenSqueesey Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
To me, i think that her face is too light, (just a guess) I think maybe some more shading would help? And the left eye could drop down a larl bit. Other than that i'd say it's fantastic!
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UfanNitram Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know, ask her ==> :iconquilava23:
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:iconlokalinda:
LokaLinda Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
Para mi esta bien dibujado el animal ^^
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Sparky-Sumi Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it looks pretty good. Except I think the left ear is a bit too high, and so is the left eye. If you bring them down a bit more, then it's good.
Oh, and maybe a bit more fur texture?
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:iconunderdogangeldust:
underdogangeldust Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i think the left eye could be lowered just a tad, but other than that, it looks fine! great work ^-^
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:icongiovaroyal:
GiovaRoyal Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it
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oOJupiterOo Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm.. i don't know it
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:iconpsychotic-love:
Psychotic-Love Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the nose is too much to the right, try slightly inclinating it to the left.
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:iconseoul-mate:
Seoul-Mate Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The top of the head looks 3/4ths but the nose and mouth are straight, maybe if you angle it it would look better.
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MewCherryBlossom Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I think it looks fine
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eienharu Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
I'm not positive but by the looks of it, if you straigeten the black part that leads to his nose on "his" left eye it may make the muzzle looked more shaped, its a minor fix but I believe it would help ALOT! I hope this helps
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:iconnyile:
Nyile Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist
The nose needs to be a little more to the right, and i think that will help, but i think its really good on its own!~
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SakuraPetalWolf Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The left side of his face is too much symetric to the right sight. He isn't facing the 'full front' right? I would say let the left side be more 'away'...

Don't knw how to explain it better ;)
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Aika-tan Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe have the left ear a little more to the side?
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:iconrhuannon:
Rhuannon Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013   Digital Artist
I think the cat's head a little ta turn to the right, the rest is beautiful ms
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BlueSapphire2000 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Here,
you can try this one for drawing fur: [link]

P.S. I don't do digital art, but I found these link anyway! :)
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Manny9591 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The best suggestion I can give you for tips, is to research actual snow leopard faces in a google search, (for its easiest, and quickest) the muzzle seems a little off, and the eyes, but I too suck a animals, and yours is vastly batter then mine!
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Saige199 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
the cats right eye ( the one nearest to the edge of the pic) is higher up than the other one, it would probably look more natural if either it was brought down or the mouth was rotated clockwise and moved over a bit :) hope this helps
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Mituni14 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Good work , moon look beautiful.
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Ani-Sempai Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
The placement of the features suggests that the animal is facing forward, but the angle of the head itself suggest that is in 3/4. So my suggestion would be to turn the face to 3/4 view by moving the nose over slightly and making the eye on the left a tad slimmer So it looks like not only is the cat looking that way, it's head is facing that way as well. I hope this helps ^^
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ScOuRgE67 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Well, if you want her head to be adjusted, if you want it a little realistic, you could add a bit more fur, and have it go in all different directions, since there'e a snow storm(?). You don't want the fur to seem flat and lifeless. Try that x'P.
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furdonkadonk Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i recommend you to move the nose and mouth a little more to the left and up slightly
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murderxthexcase Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^ This is pretty good advice.
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furdonkadonk Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:O
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Omniwud-Syra Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd go with this guys advice.
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furdonkadonk Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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fishsticks213 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this might help...[link]
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OnsoulTheLostHelgast Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Well you could try to adjust it to the intended angle and slim it down a bit. That's all I got and I hope it works for ya....I'm far to much machine than living
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